To start, frankly, I'm lost. A lot of things happen and the pronouns "I" and "you" show up everywhere. I think "I" and "you" are the same person, being the reader? Or it could be some crazy stalker lady who's obsessed with the character of the reader, but I have a good feeling the former is correct. The beginning describes "I's" routine, and "I" is bored of it. "I" wants to change, which is a very weird sentence on its own. This story is a mind experiment, given how weird and unconventional it is. I think that's a super interesting concept on its own merit, but I'm still confused. I didn't think that was Emshwiller's intention, at least I hope it wasn't. I like "mind-experiment" stories like this, but please make it make sense. Not right away, of course, but after you do some thinking and theorizing, everything should make sense. It's like a puzzle. You have the pieces ...
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